I really liked the grip the beginning had me in, but I felt that the finish was a bit abrupt. Other than that, the sound is bouncing and ricocheting in my cranium, a feeling that I do enjoy.
I really liked the grip the beginning had me in, but I felt that the finish was a bit abrupt. Other than that, the sound is bouncing and ricocheting in my cranium, a feeling that I do enjoy.
Thanks for the review, I'm really glad you enjoyed this song :) and yes the ending is a tad abrupt I wasn't sure where to go with it as i didn't want it being "too" repetitive, never knew, might make another mix! sometime
Squares of a delicious milk-chocolate bar - for the ears: absolutely sweet.
thanks!
You could definitely improve on the flow, but I'm rating you on the vocals and not so much on the piano portion:
Disregarding some of the off-pitch moments, your voice is especially beautiful when it hits the higher notes. For example, I found that 00:25 and 1:30 begin to invoke powerful emotions (which songs should do); choral and overtone singing suits you :)
I'd like to commend on what you have so far and encourage you to practice, practice, practice.
The piano is an old instrumental that I downloaded from freesound.org to use for radio plays I used to try to make... so it wasn't created by me. I thought I gave credit to the one who made it but I will have to recheck and see if I did that right.
It's funny, in choir I was always an alto, but I hated it. I know it is a little pitchy I will definitely practice on that and hopefully get a better, I haven't taken any vocal classes or anything so I just kind of went with it, and I know it shows, especially in the flow.
Thank you so much for your feed back.
Hahaha, I recognize those sweeps from one of FL's sfx packs. Good utilization of them :)
It's perky- in a good way.
I can't decide whether adding voice to this one would be an improvement or a drag. But anyway, I enjoyed it.
Haha yeah thank you :D
I think I would just add one phrase in one of the calm phases, but i'll have to see :D
It gave me goosebumps: the atmosphere, the rich dark voice, the growling - mwah~ wonderful blend!
Thank you much for the compliment!
Pump it, pump it, pump it!
It's certainly got cowbell; I'd like to see this continued to a greater extent. Good job on what you have thus far :)
haha well thanks for the review.
Right off the bat, the strings and the drums mesh powerful to create an unwavering, powerful emotion. Well done.
Just one thing: from 1:30 to the end there was this strange tubular, space noise that I didn't fully understand.
Thanks for the review!
You're right-- I noticed the noise at the end after I'd posted it. I added some sidechained noise to certain places to give it the texture of a recorded performance rather than a bunch of virtual instruments. Those last few seconds are ugly noise leftovers that I should have removed.
Outside of that small detail, glad you enjoyed!
Really unique. I really felt the music at 0:41 and 0:45 with the voicing of "jungle hunt". Mmm, it was a good mellow-retro listen :)
Thanks, this is based on the music near the end of the game Jungle Hunt for the Atari 2600.
If funk was what you were striving to achieve, you've got it. That bum-bum bounce and mineral synth do the trick nicely.
Keep it groovy Capn ;)
Thanks! I appreciate it.
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